Draft Velocity & Hook Lens

Load Draft Preset:

54 words

Throat-Clearing / Hedges

Passive Constructions

Fluff & Deadwood Phrases

Hook Momentum Audit Velocity: 42/100

Passive Clauses

Filler Phrases

Opening Hook Diagnostic

Weak (Throat-Clearing)

Rule 1: Why should anyone care? Draft starts with passive hedging ("It is widely acknowledged..."). Cut the preambles and drop the reader straight into the core tension.

High-Velocity Revision

Algorithmic punch-up eliminating filler & throat-clearing:

Writing daily is hard. Most writers get overwhelmed by clichéd rules before writing a single word. Here is how to fix your drafts in minutes.

Reader Attention Friction Simulator (Sentence Velocity) Bar height = word count • Color = drag factor

Sentence 1: Opening Hook Estimated Early Drop-off: 45% (High Drag) Lead Sentence Exit